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What I like: Depth. You make it clear that Paperman is in front of Toothless and is prepared to throw a paper airplane. She's looking at something offscren, perhaps a potential target.
Also, good job on her hair texture, using cross-hatching to make it thick and detailed. You put the effort in to make her a solid, defined figure.
What to think about:
Gesture. This is more directed at Toothless's rendition, because I don't know what his pose is based on merely his head. Is he crouching? Sitting and watching her launch the paper? If you're only going to draw his head, be sure to indicate his pose. I also hope that if you draw more sketches that you finish the figures, no matter how difficult they are. I sympathize because the dragons from the movie are difficult.
Hope you draw more. Happy Christmas!
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